Shen Xijiao
First, thank you Xueyuan for your inspiring message!
Secondly, thank you for your careful checking. I oversaw the format of essay. I have changed the word font from Arial Unicode MS to Arial so that it is more formal. I have also changed my spacing to 1.5.
Thirdly, thank you for pointing out my language problem. I have some difficulty to write formal English since I always write down what I want to say. This problem is also difficult for me to overcome because of my limited vocabulary. I do not know which word is more suitable to replace current word. However, I will try to make my sentence more formal by rereading it.
Last but not least, thank you for pointing out the unclear sentences. I have worked on it and written a clearer one in my WA2.
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